Kia ora Christopher, My name is Tania and I am very lucky to be the organiser of Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu. This means I get the opportunity to look at lots of class and individual blogs from all over New Zealand. I really like the way you have shared your persuasive writing by using screencastify. I like being able to listen to you as I think it persuades me more through voice rather than just reading. I think you have come up with some very strong arguments as to why smoking should be banned. You are so right - smoking does destroy your body parts! I find it hard to understand why anyone should smoke. Thank you for sharing your writing on your blog. Keep up the great work sharing. Nga mihi nui Tania
Kia ora Chris, I think that this writing is very persuasive and you will make people want to stop smoking. Do you know anyone that smokes or stopped smoking?
Talofa Chris, I really like the way you are using screencastify to share your learning about smoking and the problems it causes. You make good points and speak clearly and slowly so it is easy to listen to. Do you know people who smoke and find it hard to give up? Maria
Kia ora Christopher,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Tania and I am very lucky to be the organiser of Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu. This means I get the opportunity to look at lots of class and individual blogs from all over New Zealand. I really like the way you have shared your persuasive writing by using screencastify. I like being able to listen to you as I think it persuades me more through voice rather than just reading. I think you have come up with some very strong arguments as to why smoking should be banned. You are so right - smoking does destroy your body parts! I find it hard to understand why anyone should smoke. Thank you for sharing your writing on your blog. Keep up the great work sharing.
Nga mihi nui
Tania
Thank you Tania for your feedback.
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ReplyDeleteI think that this writing is very persuasive and you will make people want to stop smoking. Do you know anyone that smokes or stopped smoking?
Kia Ora Emily, Yes I know some people that stop smoking and smokes.
DeleteTalofa Chris,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you are using screencastify to share your learning about smoking and the problems it causes. You make good points and speak clearly and slowly so it is easy to listen to. Do you know people who smoke and find it hard to give up?
Maria
Kia Ora Maria, Thank you for the feedback and actually I know quiet few people that do.
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